ok here's what i have...
first off great guide i believe you have captured the essence. Like some of the others have been saying, go with strike for the first attack. I played swipe till the first respec, and i just wouldnt suggest it. However if you are going for longevity of your toon and plan on taking it to 50 or at least above 24(first respec if i remember correctly) dont worry too much about what you have for your initial attacks the fun really begins after you get rid of em anyways IMHO. Just make sure you are busy hittin buttons and doing damage, im a big fan of personal preference. I like the "knock em to the ground and beat em while they lay there" strategy myself, and until you get focus Air superiority might do the trick.
Strike is my filler attack now. After respec i picked up as my main attacks, focus and eviscerate. they are deadly together because of eviscerate's high damage/crit hit chance and focus is another thing to help you live longer, its hard for the enemy to strike while laying on their back. unfortunately the low end attacks will have to do you over till you get to your respec though as its very hard to get from lvl 2-18 with only 1 attack. I use combat jump to get away instead of super-speed. i spose that is personal preference, but i dont think you get a defense bonus with SS, correct me if im wrong. CJ is fast enough when you couple it with the fitness's hurdle. Just a couple of things to think about in planning for the higher lvls, but you pretty much have the lower lvls nailed. Good luck all ye Claw wielders.