Beastangel

Thank you for pointing out the flaws. I have actually been workin on them since I read the critique im hoping most of them are fixed but just in case could look over it again to see if I missed anything else if so it will probably need a little more work. I dont want it to win awards I just want it to be a good story. Sorta like practice for the books I'm gonna try to write.

i feel like a like a complete idiot sometimes